Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of economic development, some individuals claim that we ought to destroy historic structures and construct new ones instead of spending too much money on maintaining and restoring these existing structures. From my point of view, I do completely agree with this statement.
On the one hand, in place of erecting the new buildings, we should maintain the ancient ones preserving the long-standing history and valuable cultural heritage. In other words, no one could deny that there is a close correlation between many memorable buildings and the cultural identity of a nation. Furthermore, it is true that historic structures may be regarded as tourist attractions generating a significant amount of revenue for the tourism industry. For instance, Hoi An Ancient Town is one of the places that attracts the most tourists annually, famous for its houses with bold ancient architecture. Besides, it is a matter of fact that the teaching of national literature and history from ancient buildings in person is one of an effective way to enhance greatly insight into the cultural merits, historical information and traditional norms in a vivid and lively way.
On the other hand, demolishing downgraded and substandard old buildings is an advantageous strategy. With the fast-paced nature of modern existence, besides the increasing demands for dwellings due to population explosion, the necessity of modern office buildings which not only meet the demand for a large number of people to work efficiently, but also contribute to creating a beautiful landscape for the nation is higher day by day. Along with globalization, cutting-edge architecture may leave a deeper impression on overseas business partners that results in encouraging international cooperation as well as promoting the development of our economy. In addition, with the exception of conserving historic qualities, remarkable and innovative buildings may also play an important role in tourism development attempts..For example, the iconic Landmark 81, one of the highest structures in Southeast Asia, can evoke curiosity for tourists and become a landmark earning much money for the government.
In conclusion, to achieve long-term growth, I believe that the national budget should be allocated equally to preserving old structures and erecting new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49860724234 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15502373706 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596100278552 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5076094337 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.5 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188931575164 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678852004247 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447899825151 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107458977109 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313989875907 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.