Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issue of whether families with children attending private schools should be exempted from paying taxes that support the state education system has sparked considerable debate. I completely agree with the favour of tax exemption for families sending children to private schools.
To begin with, I believe that parents who opt for private schools are making a conscious decision to invest in their children’s education outside the state system. Tax relief could make private education more accessible and expand the range of educational choices available to parents. By doing so, they are essentially alleviating the burden on the state education system.
Moreover, Private schools often come with considerable financial expenses, which might be difficult for some families to manage alongside their regular taxes. Private schools often have additional costs beyond tuition fees, such as uniforms, textbooks, extracurricular activities, and transportation, which further strain families' budgets. For instance, private schools often offer various extracurricular activities, such as sports teams, music lessons, or art programs, which come with their fees.
In conclusion, the focus should remain on enhancing the overall quality of education and ensuring that all children, regardless of their economic background, have access to a well-funded and robust education system.
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- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89190248798 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7613782578 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.111111111 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416170201055 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178046770502 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934283788195 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247780044027 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113644073897 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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