The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie chart provides about the porpotion of people using digital net work according age group in Jamestown for a year 2018.over all;the genar trend of James town social media users in 2018 the older people were would be to use digital net work in terms the most people who used the significanct feature of the chart ;the largest category of digital communicators was the group adged 13 to25 ; Which accounted for 40% of total user .Additionally;the next group segment of the population using social media include people adged between 26 and 35.which added together these two categories made up of three quarters of the world wide web of Jamestown social media who used digital plat forms in 2018.in Jamestown the category with the lowest percentage users included people over 55 years old .accounting for 2% of all users.the third was joined by people adged 46 to 55 people between 36.45 age . respectively.note that those adged over36% and only 25% of Jamestown social media users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9578313253 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68735992094 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 22.4926829268 369% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 406.5 43.030603864 945% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 411.5 112.824112599 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 22.9334400587 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175201085007 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136136203125 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247155317945 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175201085007 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.4 13.2329268293 328% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 61.2550243902 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 10.3012195122 335% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.06136585366 141% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.9970731707 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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