International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the
country that they visited. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is widely acknowledged that in the contemporary area, traveling abroad is an upward trend due to the rise of incomes and the advancements in personal living conditions. International travel becoming a prevalent trend can bring about many advantages to both the traveler and the visited country. Although this trend may indeed have potential drawbacks, I’m convinced that they are vastly eclipsed by substantial benefits.
On the one hand, an international traveler has to accomplish complex procedures to be immigrated to another country, for instance, applying for a visa and proof of personal income. In addition, Traveling to an alien culture is not easy if you don't have a detailed plan or prepare for incidental situations that could happen. The massive traveling from abroad can upset the local facilities and biology, for example, vandalism and flora and fauna depletion.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned drawbacks, I firmly believe that the benefits are outweighed the drawbacks. Traveling to a new country can give a person life-changing moments, especially for those who are always sick for thrilling and fresh experiences. Traveling is conducive to cultural exchange and promotes cultural pride. Through traveling a person can broaden their horizons, and hone practical skills, sometimes traveling can be the best therapy after a stressful time. Traveling can also benefit the visited country's economy and tourism by creating many job opportunities for local people.
In conclusion, while international travel has certain drawbacks, I’m of the opinion that the benefits are far weightier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55421686747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09943905819 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2313425759 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323519169341 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118340773769 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10737273516 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186098715723 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697113701382 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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