You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It seems clear that few people spend time on their hobbies in the modern days for several reasons.
First of all, many workers and employees are acquired to complete the given deadlines. This gives rise to invisible pressure for them due to the large amounts of deadlines. Day by day, the one thing that exists in their mind is that find tactics to complete the work promptly. As a result, they may not have the private time to relax and think about other things. According to the survey about the topic " How long do you spend your time on doing hobbies?", which was made by Orange magazine in 2018 and occurred over five months. After finishing that survey, the specialists arrived at the conclusion of approximately 20% of participants spent time enjoying their hobbies and the rest put their effort into completing the work. The next factor is they aim for their goals higher than their ability hence putting themself under pressure. It is true that when someone lives under high pressure, which means time spent doing what they are keen on, will gradually decrease day by day. Therefore, aiming the goals as well as exactly knowing self is considerably crucial.
Loving self is crucial in spending time on hobbies. If we continue to work without taking care of ourselves, this will result in bad consequences for the individual and society in general. For example, the large number of deadlines may wholly put pressure on employees as well as the company's productivity as a whole. Due to the high pressure, employees may get diseases such as cancer, high blood pressure, and psychological diseases. In addition, these things might have a relative influence on society especially students after graduation, they will be embedded in the fear that work can kill them and get the youth from them. about putting higher goals than their capability also has the same signs of the individual and an added sign is they may be lost of guidance because of pursuing their aim with no exit. For one thing in society, if the young generation continues to flatter themself complacently, they will bother employers because of their unlogical CVs. That means young people are not considered enough to know themself by doing hobbies or finding what they like or love in their free time.
The young generation nowadays has the propensity for living on social media such as Facebook, Instagram or Tiktok, and so on instead of living in realness. I firmly believe that they can use social media for entertainment but not overuse it. Hobbies need to exist in our life with private purpose that balances life. Therefore, we need to create a chance for us to enjoy our free time with hobbies.
We only have the right life once time so take advantage of it to enjoy it logically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: About
... kill them and get the youth from them. about putting higher goals than their capabil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, for one thing, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84453781513 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54083589488 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6269845225 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179289315643 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508718501492 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502001305505 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973460277079 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492229193379 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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