A magazine wants to include contributions from its reader for an article called The book that influenced me the most In your letter describe What the book was about how it influenced you and whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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A magazine wants to include contributions from its reader for an article called, "The book that influenced me the most".
In your letter describe, What the book was about, how it influenced you, and whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

Dear Madam or Sir,

I am writing this letter to share my thoughts regarding the book, "Dream Interpretation" by Sigmond Freud for your article, "The book that influenced me the most".

Firstly, I want to share that the interpretation about the dreams given by the author in the book is very accurate. This was the only reason that made in believe in this book. For instance, I always use to see a running horse in my dream so, then I read the interpretation and found out that it represents success and progress which was close connected to my Master's degree result. Even more, in the book there was information about the sub-conscious mind which was responsible for showing dreams.

In my view, this book will always attract a group of people who study Psychology or the ones who are curious to find the cause behind their dream. There would not be a big fan base, but people with some profession will go for it.

I hope my ideas might work as a good contribution towards your article.

Thanking you,
Your sincere,
Hitakshi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ve in this book. For instance, I always use to see a running horse in my dream so, ...
^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you, Your sincere, Hitakshi
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, so, then, for instance, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87767348905 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0096374785 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307411465864 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115129068201 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573929784513 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150852625191 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653986606695 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ve in this book. For instance, I always use to see a running horse in my dream so, ...
^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you, Your sincere, Hitakshi
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, so, then, for instance, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87767348905 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0096374785 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307411465864 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115129068201 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573929784513 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150852625191 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653986606695 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.