In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era, individuals in various places have witnessed the significant and rapid alterations in their own lives, which have had a strong influence on family connections. Although this idea has some drawbacks, I believe that the positive outcomes are greater.
To begin with, there are several negative effects on the family when lifestyle and life pace have changed over time. There is a tendency for people, especially the young, to hang out and establish a myriad of social relationships as well as go into business due to the facilitation services that authorities supply to help increase annual income; as a result, they will emphasize on working hard to earn much more money. Thus, there is a lack of interaction among family members and the dinner gathering. Moreover, as the Internet and technology have developed at a fast speed recently, some youngsters are prone to possess the sedentary lifestyle and ignore surrounding activities. This will lead to a disappointment to their parents and relatives.
Nevertheless, the vibrant life pace bring more benefits for the residents nowadays. Initially, the more money workers make, the more expenditure on taking care of their family members and all of them also have much time on the weekends to strengthen the family. In addition, the emergence of new modern media, including social networking sites, has given a support to those who are living far from their relatives. For example, when Covid-19 pandemic broke out, it was mandatory for everyone all over the world to keep their distance from each other so that several online platforms like Zoom, WhatsApp,... provided opportunities for them to keep in touch and chat with their friends, parents,…
In conclusion, I am totally convinced that the modern ways of living today have bring people significant merits. Therefore, their family connections will not be effected much; in contrast, some renovations will improve the living conditions and loves among citizens.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...at the modern ways of living today have bring people significant merits. Therefore, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27358490566 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84909304821 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8920367298 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125660954008 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463401391584 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420699091264 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836081645558 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605058185233 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ral online platforms like Zoom, WhatsApp,... provided opportunities for them to ke...
^^
Line 5, column 693, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...uch and chat with their friends, parents,… In conclusion, I am totally convince...
^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...at the modern ways of living today have bring people significant merits. Therefore, t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27358490566 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84909304821 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8920367298 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125660954008 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463401391584 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420699091264 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836081645558 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605058185233 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.