Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Rich countries mainly have more of money as compared to poorer countries,they offer them financial aid to help the poor countries to overcome their hunger and poverty. To be fair this does not seem to work out as there are many factors for which money will be used in the country having poverty .so there will less money left to solve the problems of poverty , so the developed countries need to look out for some differnt approch for this particular problem.
Developed countries have some of their resorces in excess such as education facilities ,even some of the financially stable countries have shortage of skilled workers . These nations can provide education to the children and provide employment to the people and they can also provide meals atleast once in a day to the people in poor country . Meals should be provided to the people only until the finacial condition of the county gets settled.Top MNC's can be established to provide employment to the qualified people in the region
According to my perspective instead of giving financial aid this plan will majorly change the country's financial structure from being poor to rich .This process may take a more amount of time but the poverty from the country will be eradicated once for and all.
In the end for this plan to succeed there will be a need of cooperation between both of the nations . The plan will wont work if there is no undestanding in people of this country. Children need to go to school, people need learn working in employment sector which will help countries financial resources to go up. So everything is dependent on both the countries. This plan cannot exist without one's Co operation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, even so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59815401403 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.441730232 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.1 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276020520832 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104179820915 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102798023493 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179172215499 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931190367221 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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