Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The big liability has become pretty much an everyday occurrence. Regarding this, many insist that the memorable time from birth until nowadays in every individual is the period of teenagers, while great accountability must be borne, however, others opt for adult life because more agreeable that brings. In this essay, both these viewpoints will be closely examined before my personal opinion is expressed.
It is entirely reasonable for some to advocate the idea of the happy teenage stage of the person's growth. First, children have parents to look after. They can leave the difficulties that came to their life in that period behind and enjoy fun stories and interesting games. Secondly, the teenager has no responsibilities regarding the economy and social stratification. Buying a house is a case in point when grown-up individuals will opt for the house that makes more financial sense, is affordable and budget-friendly.
On the other end of the spectrum, detractors say it will make decisions freely and have a better understanding of thinking. No doubt the adult will front to a great liability, but the sense of adjustment is even greater. Secondly, the adult can provide a window of knowledge, opportunity, and relationship that can upgrade themselves. For example, some people nowadays archive success that they never thought when they were a child.
To conclude, some people look back on the past and feel happiness but others pleasure in their adulthood. While there are strong arguments on both sides of the debate, I firmly believe that every stage of life will bring different experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ints will be closely examined before my personal opinion is expressed. It is entirely reasonabl...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... idea of the happy teenage stage of the persons growth. First, children have parents to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22393822394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91603706484 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2314605776 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191059943886 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552637587779 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401776277583 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110879451965 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029584453608 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.