There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most
important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, it true that money one of the reasons for people to go to their workplace. While one school of thoughts holds that this is the prominent motivation, I am convinced that companies could enhance their employees’ skills and provide a motivating working environment, which are more significant than money.
To begin with, employees could develop their profession and soft skills at workplace. This is especially beneficial to young people who have no past experience as corporations usually provide professional training, which gives their employees a good grasp of practical office skills. In addition to that, experiences resulting from tasks that are given from managers to their subordinates can improve those employees’ problem-solving skill. A higher position, as a result, provides the ones who have many years of experience with better job offerings and treatment.
Furthermore, an encouraging workplace could be a reason for an individual to stay in the workforce. Many enterprises have created open working spaces and provided recreational facilities to boost the efficiency of their workforce. A pertinent example would be Google as they offer their employees with unsurpassed technology and services, which made them one of the most powerful corporations in the world. Some companies have salary offers that are not so attractive but they provide meals during the day with no extra fee, which could still attract certain groups of individuals.
In conclusion, while money is essentially in this materialistic society, I believe that the experiences that companies provide, along with their cutting-edge amenities, are of more important than that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
In this modern era, it true that money one of the reasons for peopl...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...lly beneficial to young people who have no past experience as corporations usually...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... beneficial to young people who have no past experience as corporations usually provide profess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52713178295 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08817206164 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9016195541 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.056038073502 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239577853016 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025404108241 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423248295906 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252264300507 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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