In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
With the rapid expansion of the global economy, parents are increasingly engaged in their professional lives and devote less time to their children. As a result, young people who lack the necessary education and parental guidance are more likely to fall prey to and engage in criminal activity. In addition, the prevalence of modern technology has enabled young people to access the Internet and television with ease, allowing them to acquire violent behaviors. Through the consumption of violent films, young people may develop a distorted perception of reality and moral standards, which may eventually lead them to engage in illegal activities.
There are a variety of strategies that could be employed to penalize the juveniles who perpetrate the offenses. The government has the power to impose harsher sentences on adolescent offenders. Teenagers should receive community services as a way to instill social values and reintegrate them into society. Furthermore, those who engage in violent crimes, such as assault or murder, should be subject to stricter penalties. Such dangerous offenders should be subject to longer prison sentences in order to reduce their likelihood of backsliding after release.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, so, still, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86290196375 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9695318533 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101951490267 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381194744677 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033050561052 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744655664101 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039010024541 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, so, still, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86290196375 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9695318533 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101951490267 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381194744677 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033050561052 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744655664101 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039010024541 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.