at the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many countries are densely populated by young adults. I think that when a country has young population, it can benefit both society and the elderly.
Young people are the key to progress as they are passionate enough to improve an economy of a country through hardworking, determination, and persistence. They have enough strength to work longer hours and harder, so they can create a bright social and economic prospect. If they can fulfill their ambitions and become more successful in industry and business, the governments are prosperous enough to support the old generation. As the young people can pay more taxes which can be used in healthcare system, too. when an old person suffers from a serious injury or chronic disease, that budget can be a help to those who cannot meet those costs. Moreover, a relatively large pool of young workers can help offset the financial burden of not only providing healthcare but also pension for an aging population that are unable to work anymore and needs some amount of money to spend their lives happily and easily. They deserve to have such financial merits as they have already paid their role/part to the country where they are living.
due to the power of youth, the young are more passionate to find a better way to live and are more creative. In other words, young people are typically more productive and innovative to start businesses that can contribute to economic growth and prosperity. If the country embraces more old people, it has to allocate more budget for their health care and cannot focus on its prospect. The old employees are thought to be more fragile and vulnerable, so difficult tasks cannot be given to them; as a result, industrial sections and social services may get negatively affected.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of young adults in a country can outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, as to, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95873015873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66387987415 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8607454812 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123762156577 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545049147823 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557100473359 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110368050502 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574360187939 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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