Some people ethink that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree oe disagree?
many have been debating about the function of music in people's lives. listening to music can help people to be more relax and i am going to support this view.
First of all, if people’s mind is calm and relax, their reactions and making decision in a perfect way is going better and more logical. For instance, there are some kinds of music like classical music or that one related to meditation can be helpful.
In addition, the most important reason is that, it removes the bad and negative sensations. When your aggression, nervousness and stress are empty, you have a good connection with your friends, families and colleagues.
Another thing is, having a good sleeping experience causes to be happy and ready about any obstacles ahead. This issue has many advantages on your brain to be calm and having a good sleep especially when you are fed up your job, family difficulties and anything.
At the end, when you are relax, the rate of crime that was related to aggressive reactions like fights are going down. For instance, if you listen to the performances, you will be more peaceful so that nothing cannot foreclose your calmness and getting you to be angry. Thinking in a good way cause to prevent many problems such as crimes, divorces and the like.
In conclusion, using music as a method to be peaceful and having a better lifestyle with a lot of happiness is very popular and I think everyone all over the world has same voice about that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, another thing, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69921875 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53678684079 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0756708171 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181100930697 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725648079198 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061568884729 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100025281019 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824110215892 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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