the enviroment is getting worse and worse Can you give specific examples reasons and solutions

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the enviroment is getting worse and worse . Can you give specific examples , reasons and solutions .

In these days and ages , our enviroment is a hot potato for discussion , it is getting worse and worse due to human .First of all , one of the most dangerous pollutions is the air pollution . Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles which also lead to another problem is global warming , may have a devasting on the planet in this world . As the human pollution increases ,them produce even a larger quantities of wastes that spoil not only the land but also contaminate the rivers and oceans . Secondly , I have come up with the solutions to all that problems . We need to reduce the air pollution first , the governments need to pass laws to emissions from factories , to illusion : Force companies to use renewable energy such as solar , wind or water energy . Encourage people to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad ; therefore , reduce emissions . In addition , you can also apply reduce ,recycle and reuse as the solution . To sum up , we should have to do something to keep our enviroment and our planet a place worth living .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6157867393 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2959625642 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135433371716 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056303406638 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751187880009 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135433371716 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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