Write about the reasons of the air and water pollution and how to decrease them.
For the being time, people have been facing to environment pollution. The two biggest problem are air and water pollution for the following reasons: Firstly, gas emmisions from factories and exhaust fumes vehicles lead to air pollution. There are industrializes that everyone need to build business unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It is the reason why someone have much heath problem. Secondly , people suffer from pollutions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect the environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean, in the lake, in the roadside..., which go on increasing pollutants pumped into the atmosphere. Consequently, it's necessary for everybody to save the nature from rising pollution. The first method, we have to raise children's alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends on the younger generations. The second, somebody must obey 3RS compaign: reduce, reuse, recycle. Finally, we should encourage to use public transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease garbage.In short, people have devasted the environment lead to serious pollutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ss unit in order to sastify their life. they cut down many trees to have enough wide...
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Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... have enough wide developing engineers. Therefore; people are living surrounded CO2. It i...
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Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...unded CO2. It is the reason why someone have much heath problem. Secondly , people s...
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Line 1, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omeone have much heath problem. Secondly , people suffer from pollutions as the hu...
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Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tions as the human population increase. However; their awareness is too bad to protect ...
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Line 1, column 668, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... environment from keeping on polluting. they litter everywhere such as: in the ocean...
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Line 1, column 964, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ise childrens alertness, even as a kid. Because the futire of the environment depends o...
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Line 1, column 1190, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...transport and take fewer flights abroad so as to decrease garbage.In short, people have ...
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Line 1, column 1216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...lights abroad so as to decrease garbage.In short, people have devasted the environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42288557214 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87347134403 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706467661692 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.48960562 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104244419856 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273444075445 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464755278034 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104244419856 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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