Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree that and say this is no longer true.
On the social media, it has been emerging arguments that what one should do to achieve success in his/her life. While some opinions say that obtaining a university education is the most efficient path to success, others claim that it is no longer true in nowadays. In my opinion, I suppose getting a university degree is the easiest way to attain the success but it is not the only way.
It is essential to acknowledge that success is influenced by many factors, not just having academic knowledge and getting a university background. In particular, in the entertainment field, where natural talent and good appearance play a crucial role in over 90% of successful individuals. For example, the K-pop girl band, Blackpink, has created continuously broken records and become one of the world’s most successful bands. Although they were well educated, now they have had a lavish life and enjoyed better facilities. However, attending a tertiary education is a must to work as a scientist, a doctor or other possessions.
By doing hard labor, it is true that an illiterate person can become wealthy but he/she cannot contribute to the invention of new medicines or the construction of skyscrapers. Obviously, the university provides its students with the specialized and professional knowledge to easily apply in the practical experience. In the medicine fields, for instance, without the higher education, it is actually dangerous for patient’s health when the masses cannot afford their specialization in a particular area. Moreover, attending the university not only broadens the origin of knowledge in the respective subjects, but also teaches its students meta skills as communication, teamwork and logical thinking. Through this process, an individual can identify his/her strengths and weaknesses and seek ways to improve them as well as know how to attain his success in the future.
In conclusion, humans have various different paths to success but obtaining a university education is always the best and fastest way and the best choice for everyone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... others claim that it is no longer true in nowadays. In my opinion, I suppose getting a uni...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...er, attending a tertiary education is a must to work as a scientist, a doctor or other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27659574468 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02676047909 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4484156394 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299512666375 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899063333525 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922013901359 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187094561262 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107885599503 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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