You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing to request you to push the job onboarding date to the next month 5th of October and also to explain my genuine reason.
Firstly, I apologize as I am unable to start on the said date. Even though I am aware of the company's policy, but I will have to tell you my situation as I am hospitalised due to medical emergency.
While going home, right after the interview, I had a major accident and the doctor said that there are fractures. The estimation of recovery is approximately 3 weeks.
However, I think that it would be better if I could get more time to join. Therefore, I request you to kindly postpone the start date for next month. Please find attached are my reports and admit letter as a proof for your reference.
Thanking you for aniticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Om
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60759493671 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69459748981 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.28654837 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319463054951 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104649990141 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659582424736 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149128338869 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788852020224 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60759493671 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69459748981 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.28654837 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319463054951 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104649990141 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659582424736 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149128338869 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788852020224 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.