More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is a common belief that city as a place of opportunity, but there are also some major drawback of living in a large metropolis. I’m of the opinion that governments could do much more to improve city life for average inhabitant.
People live in the city are suffer from cost of living, which is higher than village or small town. They need to pay for housing, transport even for food. Moreover, studies have shown that crime and poverty rates are higher than country. It makes people feel less safety. In addition, the air quality is really poor. Day by day, people face with traffic congress, air polluted from vihicle. In this regard, the city life is not easy, it acctually unhealthy and stressful.
In this case, government play an sinificant role to tackle problem. Firstly, they can invest money on social housing or adjust affordable accommodate, which help reduce living cost. Furthermore, to decrease traffic jam and air pollution, the politican can promote resident use public transport like bus, subway, highway. The more convenient transport provides, the more people use it. And the last, many people move to large city cause many job opportunities. Therefore, the government can move industry to rural and create more jobs. It will be the better way to reduce the pressure to the urban.
To sum up, it is clear that living in the large city is very difficult. Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by government to enhance quality of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...nhabitant. People live in the city are suffer from cost of living, which is higher th...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...sful. In this case, government play an sinificant role to tackle problem. Firs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59176033694 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7952916446 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406800312918 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103350052648 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752977780821 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240978931331 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515702016203 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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