Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.
What problems does this shortage cause?
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Water is one of the most essentials needs of humans, animals and plants. Without water it will be a life would be catastrophic. catastrophical event in our lives. However due to the increase on population density the density of the population in the past decades, there is a surge demand for fresh water. While this the demand for the fresh water is keeps increasing, fresh water sources are is actually very limited since most of Earth is covered in , while the earth is 70% water but those mostly is a sea water. The lack of fresh water issue has raised concern in a global scale, we Wemust act quickly before reaching we reach to the point where freshwater becomes the fresh water becoming a rare commodity.
With the endless residence construction projects and many newly found industries industry to supports the economy and livelihood, water sources have become more and more scarce. it slowly decreasing the surface of where fresh water sources is found. Other concerns that might be correlated with the shortage of the fresh water is the massive waste from the factories with an active production cycle. They dump so many waste until it ruins the ecosystem of the freshwater.
The shortage of fresh water air is becoming a collective issue that has to be dealt with immediately. every individuals can take part in overcoming this issue. As an individuals, we can start to be more mindful of our water intake. As for household scale, grey water could be applied to ensure the efficiency of water use. On a larger scale, the government must take action in regulating the construction works to ensure it will not intervene interfere with the fresh water sources., also government The government also need to take a serious measures enforcement so that the corporate corporations will comply to the waste management rules.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will be a life would be catastrophic. catastrophical event in our lives. Howev...
^^
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Catastrophical
...will be a life would be catastrophic. catastrophical event in our lives. However due to the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...surge demand for fresh water. While this the demand for the fresh water is keeps ...
^^
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...imited since most of Earth is covered in , while the earth is 70% water but those ...
^^
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sea water'.
Suggestion: sea water
... earth is 70% water but those mostly is a sea water. The lack of fresh water issue has rais...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, we Wemust act quickly before reaching we reach to the point where freshwater ...
^^
Line 1, column 637, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act quickly before reaching we reach to the point where freshwater becomes the f...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rces have become more and more scarce. it slowly decreasing the surface of where ...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun waste seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wastes'.
Suggestion: many wastes
...n active production cycle. They dump so many waste until it ruins the ecosystem of the fre...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...that has to be dealt with immediately. every individuals can take part in overcoming...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... take part in overcoming this issue. As an individuals, we can start to be more mindful of our...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'measures'' or 'measure's'?
Suggestion: measures'; measure's
... government also need to take a serious measures enforcement so that the corporate corpo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.928802589 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590393428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9407469642 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242984574657 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847320971432 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592449277085 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162362675151 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471836810912 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will be a life would be catastrophic. catastrophical event in our lives. Howev...
^^
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Catastrophical
...will be a life would be catastrophic. catastrophical event in our lives. However due to the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...surge demand for fresh water. While this the demand for the fresh water is keeps ...
^^
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...imited since most of Earth is covered in , while the earth is 70% water but those ...
^^
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sea water'.
Suggestion: sea water
... earth is 70% water but those mostly is a sea water. The lack of fresh water issue has rais...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, we Wemust act quickly before reaching we reach to the point where freshwater ...
^^
Line 1, column 637, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act quickly before reaching we reach to the point where freshwater becomes the f...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rces have become more and more scarce. it slowly decreasing the surface of where ...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun waste seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wastes'.
Suggestion: many wastes
...n active production cycle. They dump so many waste until it ruins the ecosystem of the fre...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...that has to be dealt with immediately. every individuals can take part in overcoming...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... take part in overcoming this issue. As an individuals, we can start to be more mindful of our...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'measures'' or 'measure's'?
Suggestion: measures'; measure's
... government also need to take a serious measures enforcement so that the corporate corpo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.928802589 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590393428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9407469642 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242984574657 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847320971432 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592449277085 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162362675151 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471836810912 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.