Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011
The provided line chart illustrates the figure of people who went to the cinema once a month or more from various age groups in proportion in a European nation between 2000 and 2011.
As it can be clearly seen that most of age groups rose dramatically each year. However, the young ages seemed to be decreased in 2011.
According to the ages from 7 to 14, it increased dramatically until 2006 and rocketed to 50 percent in 2007. In 2008, it decreased once again, with only 35 percent and boomed to nearly 55 percent of people that went went to the movie theater in 2010. Getting back to the details of ages from 15 to 24, there was 10 percent of people at the beginning and went tup to 20 percent in 2008. There were 20 more percent of people in 2010, but it dropped by 10 percent in 2011.
Categorically speaking, the adults which ages were from 25 to 35 years old had a low percentage at the first time, then rose to approximately 10 percent. It fluctuated to only 30 percent in 2011. Finally, the ages 35 and over which had a minimal people in joining the cinema. It grew sightly to 10 percent in 2011.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-11-01 | huong789 | 73 | view |
| 2021-12-20 | naufalrahman96 | 84 | view |
| 2021-12-20 | naufalrahman96 | 84 | view |
| 2021-09-06 | kiran sanghera | 67 | view |
| 2021-08-16 | Phạm Thùy Linh | 84 | view |
- Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world Today the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem What are the causes of increasing demand What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem 67
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both view and give your own opinion 81
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both view and give your own opinion 56
- In spite of the advences made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 67
- Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011 73
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ropean nation between 2000 and 2011. As it can be clearly seen that most of age...
^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: went
...med to nearly 55 percent of people that went went to the movie theater in 2010. Getting b...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36057692308 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44940953367 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7186870668 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302943967564 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121596440836 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117312890204 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217724784772 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155788131424 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ropean nation between 2000 and 2011. As it can be clearly seen that most of age...
^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: went
...med to nearly 55 percent of people that went went to the movie theater in 2010. Getting b...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36057692308 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44940953367 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7186870668 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302943967564 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121596440836 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117312890204 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217724784772 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155788131424 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.