Some people think that governments should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a general debate on education that it is thought the government should invest more money in teaching science for a country's development. I will give some of my opinions here.
Firstly , investing more money in teaching science than other subjects may not promote the development of a country’s science technology. The knowledge that students studied at school are limited that too much economic support is useless to some degrees .Thus it will cause a waste of the money which is actually a loss of a country
Furthermore，investing more money in teaching science is unfair to students in other majors , Students who don’t expertized in science also have ability and ambition to make progress for their country's development . If more money are spent in science education, less money are spent in arts and literature, which will cause students’ dissatisfaction . Moreover， many students may study science instead of their dreaming major, distributing to a strong unbalance between science and other fields for a long time, which is bad for a country’s development.
However, if more money is invested in teaching science, the facilities and teachers will be more helpful to students and obviously they will learn better which will contribute to a success in learning. By the solid knowledge learnt at school，students will make some progress in science field and even make a country develop.
To sum up, although investing more money in science teaching than other subjects may accelerate the progress of a country’s development , but the disadvantages are also clear that it will make learning in other field become more difficult, causing the decline of other fields’ development of a country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15415037459 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492700729927 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.901011541 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388328999698 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199378400398 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11477988504 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262587626882 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564468891893 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.