The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopement.
The given plans give information about the structure of a sports center in a university at the present and future times. Overall, there will be some extravagant alterations to the general plans.
At the present, the sports center consists of two different sections, indoors and outdoors. In the indoor section, there is a reception area, a 25-meter pool surrounded by a small gym, a seating area as well as a changing room. Outside, there are two large outdoor courts located on either side of the indoor section.
However, in the future, those two outdoor courts will be completely removed to make space for the expansion of the overall indoor layout. In addition, the gym will also be expanded in terms of size. There will be some newly added features to the reception area such as a sports shop and a cafe. Another feature that is worth mentioning is the addition of two new changing rooms, making the total number of changing rooms to be three compared to the present layout. On the west of the sports center, there will be a leisure pool, as well as a sports hall and two new dance studios located on the northeast of the reception area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
...al number of changing rooms to be three compared to the present layout. On the west of t...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...re will be a leisure pool, as well as a sports hall and two new dance studios located ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68811881188 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49558476892 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2688247607 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167213860239 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722674570492 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560455301216 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121699806485 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579912701657 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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