Some say parents whose children are breaking the law should be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are numerous reasons why people might argue that parenting influences a tremendous part in delinquent’s criminality behavior, one of which is a trend that is usually seen in these deviant acting little kid is a negligent family, without the care and education needed for one’s child to be raised properly, it is no surprised to witness how they could turn out. If parents condone a child's misconduct from time to time those petty crimes that are conducted by those misled youngsters could in turn create ignorant behavior and worsen a children’s immature mindset. Another justification for vicarious liability of parents for being too lax in nurturing their children is that legitimate rules in most countries assume that childrens under the age of 18 who are called adolescent are certainly not needed to claim any responsibility at all after their infraction. Therefore deviant acts by children are broadly considered unwise thoughts and responsibility should be laid on those parents who guided them.
Notwithstanding some critic’s objections, I support the view that youngsters who are directly violating the law should be the one to place the responsibility onto. First and foremost to prevent children's peers from imitating each other's deviant act and learn a lesson on their own without the parent’s onus to teach them social norms, In this booming ages of technology, information is easily spread and acknowledge widely all over the globe, therefore it would in turn higher the rate of adolescent’s criminal cases if serious penalties had not been imposed.
It should also be noted that without suitable punishment such as reforms, attending juvenile detention centers, the rate of one’s recidivism is remarkable due to the fact that children’s mindset is lacking the decisive ability to choose between right and wrong.
In sum, while there are sensible reasons to believe that parents should be the one who is responsible for their offspring’s act, my contention is that childrens are still have to serve a reasonable time in reforming centers depending on their act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30447761194 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95583590828 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620895522388 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0563042432 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.125 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.875 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167353884778 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815540954402 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415992639569 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101191338625 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127710939549 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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