Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
In the economic dimension globally, some people are of the view that there is no requirement of formal education. While another group asserts on the importance of university degree to progress in life. I will be discussing both school of thoughts in detail and share my point of view as well.
To begin with, it is a genaric mindset to complete higher studies in order to pursue a successful career path. It is quite evident as many esteemed organizations look forward to hire professionals with formal education from some prestegious universities only. It is undoubtedly a proven fact that world is led by people with degrees from educational places like Harvard or University of London etc. Many multinational organizations are run and owned by highly educated professionals.
On the contrary, there has been a significant scarcity of resources in the trade occupations. According to the recent survey at the NewYork University, many developed countries have started to pave a permanent residency pathway for skilled trade resources in order to cover the shortage. Nowadays, many people are living a wealthy and successful life with their odd jobs such as plumbing, carpantry etc. Any skilled trade profession which does not require any official degree from a college or university can be a progressive occupation.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, it is an undeniable fact that without a proper degree, an aspirant cannot dream of a prosperous life. But also we cannot overlook the requirement of informal jobs which does not require any education at all, but skills. In my opinion, university education is inevitable. Because universities not only groom people professionally but also sharpen their good personality traits. Education makes people rational minded.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is no requirement of formal education. While another group asserts on the importance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13183130883 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2405160007 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174298014992 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617165501991 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523326990318 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109451137895 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598532059432 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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