Q1:
Doctor Achebe:
Let’s think about population trends in urban and rural areas (villages). Living in urban areas can be expensive; nonetheless, when they have a choice of where to live, people in some countries do not wish to live in rural areas even if the cost of living there is lower. If governments of some countries want to attract more people to live in rural areas or villages, what is the best strategy or approach that governments can use? Why?
Claire:
I would live in a rural area if the government gave more financial help to farmers. Although it may cost very little to live in a rural area, it costs a lot to begin a career in agriculture. If I had financial help, I would start my own farm and be happy to live in a rural area.
Kelly:
In my country, urban centers are great places to live because you can access shops, restaurants, and museums. If the government of my country wanted to attract me to live in a rural area, the area would first have to attract more businesses focused on entertainment and culture than most rural areas have now.
While I strongly appreciate the points mentioned by Claire and Kelly, I want to mention that modern facilities can attract people to rural areas. Rural areas lack the most crucial facilities like state-of-the-art hospitals, high-tech transportation systems, and so on. If the government provides better health care services or better transportation, people will consider rural lifestyles easier to deal with. For instance, since the countryside in my own country is not endowed with enough trains or buses, it is very hard to move between different cities. Additionally, it is an arduous task to transfer a sick person from these places to bigger cities to get cured in modern hospitals. Accordingly, people in my homeland do not prefer living in rural areas. Therefore, in light of the considerations mentioned, improving some essential facilities is a remarkable approach regarding making villages strikingly engaging for people.
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