In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In some nations, there is a small group of people that can earn much more incomes that the others. While some people think that the government should set its country's income to a certain level, I am convinced of the idea that this development is good for the whole country. This essay will discuss both mentioned views by giving views.
On the one hand, some people believe it is a good idea for the government to allow its residents to have equal income levels. This is, firsly, because having the same salaries will create a sense of equality in every class of the community. Furthermore, it is easier for the government to manage and control the general profits and expenses of its local people as well. For instance, teachers always teach their children about generating and maintaining the equality and freedom between different people in the same society. The children are told that none of these people deserve to be treat unequally, so regulating salaries to a certain level may be better generate the same treatment between those.
On the other hand, I fully standing on the side of those who think that having different ranges of incomes is positive for the nation. First and foremost, when people earn differently, this will create the competitive environment, in which will foster people to try their best to achieve specific goals. This development, additionally, may somehow increase the economy of scale of a nation as its residents attempt to earn more and more to satisfy their needs. Furthermore, when the levels of incomes of a nation are high enough, that market will attract more people and orgainzations to come and start their businesses, which will positively affect the economic growth. Take the U.S as an example. The Vietnamese residents always motivate themselves to go to the U.S for working purposes as the earned salaries seem to be relatively higher than other regions in the world. That high incomes will assist those people to get over the difficulty in financial conditions.
In conclusion, although both views have their own appropriate perspectives, I highly agree with the view of having various ranges of incomes may be a positive development for a country as it encourages the local people to enhance their efforts in working and foster economic growth of that nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97416020672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65371783534 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498708010336 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2815011011 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348927509809 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111624527482 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697160909154 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226036109216 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892763204645 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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