Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only subjects they find interesting, and they are the best at.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals think that young people should spend the same concentration for all subjects, by contrast youth must focus on merely subjects that gives them excitement and have a highest achieve when studying this subject. In my view, education in this society now is very important for the whole people around the world and choosing the right major to help them achieve high achievement, but before to get it which they must study all subjects at school.
On the one hand, there is one major reason that young generations must concentrate for all subjects when they study at school. In the past, that period students just learned less subjects than nowadays, which measure that the pressure about studying was lighter than this day. The score at that time was not essential for all youth, and the price for studying was very expensive, then they did not to for worrying about equal all subjects. As a result, the schools these days have been adding more subjects for students which this thing can help them better in their study life’s. However, learning various subjects leads to the young people having more pressure about studying and pressure from their parents.
On the other hand, others still believe that youth should study merely subjects that they are besties than others in it and their favorite at. In the modern world, certificates are essential, which companies just receive employees have certificate. Furthermore, the difference subjects have different knowledge, then studying all subjects the school put into education programs which students have enough knowledge would be survive in this society. As a result, concentrating on only subjects can help them maintain their spirit and have no pressure about balance time for each subject.
In conclusion, individuals thought that students must equal each subject they already learning at school, but others believe young generations just focus on the subjects do not bring pressure for them. In my opinion, learning a lot of subjects is very hard to do, so parents should try to be enthusiastic and often stay beside their children. Studying only subjects is interesting, therefore they must learn more or enough subjects to maybe somedays, which they will need in the recent future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...cts that gives them excitement and have a highest achieve when studying this subj...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun subjects is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...past, that period students just learned less subjects than nowadays, which measure t...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'certificated'.
Suggestion: certificated
...h companies just receive employees have certificate. Furthermore, the difference subjects h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49931465086 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494565217391 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2498459112 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313114139095 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129626268977 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786669837485 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228848238596 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508249282986 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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