The chart below give information about the UK’s aging population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the older people population in the UK from 1985 to 2035.
Overall, the percentage of persons aged 65 and up is expected to climb in all five countries. Moreover, Wales had the highest population of elderly people in 1985, While North Ireland had the lowest population in the United Kingdom.
Look at the bar chart, the percentage of aging population in five countries is stable and don’t have more different. In 1985, the Wales is highest among four countries ( 16%) and higher second is England ( 15%), in the UK has the same data. Meanwhile, Northern Ireland is lowest ( 12%) and Scotland ( 11%)
Look at the bar chart for the next 50 years is 2035. The percentage for old people in five countries have significantly increase. In Wales and Scotland is highest ( 26% and 25%). However, the Northern Ireland and UK and the England have the same percentage about 23%. So, it can be seen that the aging population will be more higher in the next 50 years. That is can make some problems and housing in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntries 16% and higher second is England 15%, in the UK has the same data. Meanwh...
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...a. Meanwhile, Northern Ireland is lowest 12% and Scotland 11% Look at the bar c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65745856354 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50353676751 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491712707182 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7155199887 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6363636364 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178456622383 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690419125819 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484004813747 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125677584836 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493015083266 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.