The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is debatable whether there is a need for less number of weekdays and more weekend days. I completely agree with this change because personnel can gear up their energy and become socialized. This essay will elucidate these points in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, people should have enough time to spend their time with their families and a very good plan for their work. Not only can this make to more focus of people on their careers and the high rate of exploitation but it also, gives a sense of satisfaction from their employees. For instance, in Japan, employees have to relax during their work and have about four days weekend which leads to an improvement in their economy. Hence, it is necessary to have enough time to devote it spending with your family. But time off should not be longer than usual because the mood of people will change and they don’t have to go back to work.
On the other hand, the government can legislate that every organization should have an obligatory sports day for its members to play their favorite sports game. This reduces the stress on members of staff because of challenges in their work and gives peace of mind. In addition, when a company provides such a facility, their workers ensure the company pays good attention to them. Thus, they try their performance gets better and all do their best to provide the task of the company. When you don’t have enough time off you cannot have perfect concentration on your work and this makes a bad effect on your performance.
In conclusion, in every country, you have to have enough weekend days to relax, recharge, and spend your time with your family which leads to more focus and performance at work and better outcomes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...makes a bad effect on your performance. In conclusion, in every country, you hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71617161716 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40381866434 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1297045796 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216050438666 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737682790338 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612717663384 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126244489355 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492068056622 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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