People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?
Recent advancements have made life easier. Nevertheless, there are some issues that remain as complex as ever. Today's topic reveals that people living in urban cities faces significant daily life challenges; what are its reasons and how it can be solved? I will examine all the dimensions of this topic with examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Firstly, traffic has been a prevailing issue in big cities these days, because there has been increase in the use of vehicles for everyday commuting. People in cities prefer traveling in personal vehicle instead of public transports, which increases the time for commuting. For instance, a recent survey by "The Tribune" states that 78% of people in cities get late for their work due to traffic. The only solution for this problem is, if people begin using public transport or pooling when they are traveling, it will be time-efficient and decrease traffic on roads.
Secondly, noise pollution is another challenge for urban people. The reason being, the culture of night life in cities. People tend to spend hours in late night parties, which is problem for elderly and children to fall sleep. A survey by a non- profit organization stated that more than 50% of residential people complained about loud music after 11pm. The solution for this problem is the implementation of stringent laws in residential locality.
Summing up, the pertinent points mentioned above bring to a conclusion that an effective action could bring the change and resolve the situation. Problems like; traffic and noise pollution needs continuous implementation of using public transport and laws respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...een increase in the use of vehicles for everyday commuting. People in cities prefer trav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25746268657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79850497512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9810762418 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275061697148 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771196461913 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847297943714 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141650593112 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604466809674 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.