Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
some people claim that high schoool student should have a compulsory duty to get involved in unpaid community service. From my perspective, I totally agree due to some merits it offers for both individuals and society.
By requiring students to volunteer their time, we can instill a strong sense of civic duty. Participating in activities like working for charities, improving neighborhoods, or tutoring younger children can foster empathy, compassion, and a deeper understanding of societal issues. this experience can shape young minds, making them more responsible and caring citizens.
Moreover, community service provides valuable life skills. students can develop teamwork, communication, and problem-solving abilities through their volunteer work. These skills are essential for success in both academic and professional settings.
Additionally, community service can broaden students' horizons and expose them to diverse perspectives. Interacting with people from different backgrounds can challenge their assumptions and promote tolerance and understanding. this can contribute to a more inclusive and harmonious society.
In conclusion, mandatory community service is a valuable addition to high school programs. it not only benefits individual students but also contributes to the overall well-being of the community. By making community service a compulsory part of education, we can nurture a generation of responsible, compassionate, and engaged citizens.
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- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say history is one the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2077294686 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32143082544 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4425293681 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0650462435383 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023350757975 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236846722549 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388833475053 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236463333547 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.15 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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