Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is common belief that people will be more beneficial if they participate in sports that require teamwork, like football. Meanwhile other people have a contrast view that individual sports bring more benefits for players. This essay will scrutinize both views before arriving at a personal perspective.
On the other hand, a myriad of people prefers individual sports due to numerous reasons. To begin with, individual sports allow people to progress at their own speed without any concern about falling back compared to others which will enable them to focus on addressing their weaknesses and enhancing their strengths thoroughly. Not only that, but individual sports are also more convenient because people are capable of doing sport whenever they want, and they can do sports flexibly relying on their personal schedule which will contribute to avoiding getting into conflict about coordinating their time with others to play a group sport. Taking jogging as a typical instance for this, people can do this kind of sport at any time or anywhere depending on their demands. Moreover, the expenditure on purchasing equipment will decline dramatically, so people can allocate budgets on other matters that are more essential in their daily life such as buying supplement for their health or buying some stuff with occupational purpose. Those are the reasons why many people support individual sports over team sports.
On the other hand, there are some benefits that can only be gained from joining team sports. First of all, when participating in team sports people will have opportunities to be more sociable by making friends with other teammates because almost all team sports require participants to discuss with others to create an appropriate strategy and cooperate with each other during the game. It gives them a chance to get to know more about others better and bring them closer together as friends. In addition, people cannot express directly to their co-workers during a match, thus forming tacit understanding with each other is actually vital because it will enable them to make an informed decision to fight against their rival. Furthermore, people will be more competitive and motivated when they play team sports because everyone is afraid of not catching up with their teammates and desires to acquire several honorable awards in their career, most people make an effort to show the best performance with a view to receiving recognition from others such as audiences, teammates and coaches which is one of the greatest factor on the road to success of a person.
In short, either team sports or individual sports are advantageous, but I believe that the benefits of team sport bringing for people are more considerable than individual sport. Thus, people should engage in team sports if they want to communicate with more people, compete with others and gain their motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...individual sports are advantageous, but I believe that the benefits of team sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in short, kind of, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 468.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20726495726 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62957976003 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514957264957 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.072664919 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.3125 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326697505489 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135535047387 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605672592767 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236406425471 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307262494162 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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