To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement
and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,
you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how
these considerations shape your position.
Most countries in the world are best known for their major cities, and major cities are like windows
through which we can have a peep at a society's most important characteristics. It is true that small
towns have a lot to do in forming a whole society, but as far as I am concerned, studying major
cities is necessary if one wants to understand a society.
Compared to other cities in a country, major cities have the largest population, and that is the most
important reason why one should study them if one wants to know about a society. A society is
basically formed by people, and its characteristics are mainly decided by people's behaviors. So to
understand the characteristics of a society, one must study its people, study the constructs they
built, the businesses they run, and study their ways of living. Metropolises always are the most
populous cities in a country and in most probability are the most representative in a country. They
are often consisted of people from different places with different cultural backgrounds. For
example, major cities in the U.S. such as the New York City in the east and Los Angeles in the
west, all have WASP’s, African-Americans, Hispanics, and Asian-Americans at the same time, in
the same city. So in these cities we can see one of the most important features of America as being
a melting pot, which is just an example of the help of studying major cities when trying to
understand a society.
Opponents may argue that other cities and towns may have better reservation of a society's most
symbolic traditions. Well, it is often true, for some major cities have lost their most valuable
traditions through the years of developing. However, this does not mean that major cities have lost
the most important characteristics of a society. A society's characteristics do not only lie in the
traditions which we can see through our eyes, but mainly lie in people's spirits. Spirits are also
easier to be recognized in major cities, as people there are more open and many of them are always prepared to show themselves to outsiders. Thus, it is rather direct to study major cities to get to
know about a society.
It is also true that in a large society, people in different areas always have different characteristics;
they may say different languages, live in houses that have completely different styles, keep
different traditions, and rely on different kind of businesses to make a living. In this case, major
cities play an especially important role in understanding the characteristics of a society. As we all
know, major cities are always the most representative cities in an area. In the U.S., we have capital
cities in each states, and they are all symbols of their own provinces. So if you want to learn about
a province, the most convenient and efficient way is to go to its capital city.
In conclusion, societies are created by people, and to study a society is to understand people's way
of living there. So as far as I’m concerned, studying major cities is always a must in understanding
the most important characteristics of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92120075047 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01494691896 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40712945591 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.503897773 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.227272727 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2272727273 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288946161185 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102130692825 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575464173219 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084307647254 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499011879174 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.