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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The Brick Manufacturing Process
The given chart disrobes the process of making of bricks until transportation to the place of delivery. It consists of three steps, molding bricks from the clay, thermal processing and the delivery of the bricks.
To begin with, in the first step the clay is collected by a digger, and strained by passing it over a metal grid. This process removes big particles from the clay. The clay is kept on a roller and mix with water. This mixed clay is now ready for making bricks. The mixed clay is either pass through the squire box and the wire cutter is usin...
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hai sir... Thanks... Tessy
hai sir...
Thanks...
Tessy
Great job, Tessy!
Great job, Tessy!
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Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 9
No. of Words: 215 200
No. of Characters: 909 900
No. of Different Words: 110 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.163 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 9.962 7.5
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Number of Paragraphs: 4 4