the changes of, and plants for coastal area of Brightsea
The map illustrates the changes of, and plants for coastal area of Brightsea.
It is clear that, there are so many features are build and will be build in coastal area of Brightsea.
To begin, there were several major changes to transport, business and housing in the coastal area. A lighthouse changes into hotel, in the west of coastal area has been built road and near the road has been changes cafe and shop. There was a changed, the fishermen’s cottage are destroyed.
There will be plans for coastal zone. Firstly, there will be built a business feature in the north east area of Brightsea which are restaurant and apartments. The secondly, car park and supermarket also will build near the road in the east of coastal zone. In addition the hotel will be extension and the sailing club will built. Finally, the telecommunication will be projected in the south of coastal area.
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Sentence: The map illustrates the changes of, and plants for coastal area of Brightsea.
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there are so many features are build and will be build in coastal area of Brightsea.
there are so many features which are built and will be built in coastal area of Brightsea.
in the west of coastal area has been built road
in the west of coastal area road has been built
There was a changed
There was a change
there will be built a business feature in the north east area
a business feature will be built in the north east area
The secondly, car park and supermarket also will build near the road
secondly, car park and supermarket also will be built near the road
In addition the hotel will be extension and the sailing club will built
In addition the hotel will be in extension and the sailing club will be built
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