You travelled by long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.
Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter
- inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled
- describe your suitcase and what happened to it
- explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about the damage of my new suitcase which happened on 28th July while travelling from LosAngeles to Sandimas in bus service LM032.
On July 28th, I boarded bus at Losangeles Airport at 19.00 and driver placed my new suitcase in baggage section in the rear end of the bus. After I got off from the bus and collected my suitcase, I noticed suitcase got damaged under the pressure of other luggage. Before boarding the bus, my suitcase was quite firm and beautiful in red color with modern design. When I collected the luggage at my ...
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No. of Different Words: 131 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.576 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.429 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.623 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.762 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4