Production process of chocolate
The diagram shows the production of chocolate.
The process begin from cacao trees which are mainly grown in South America,Africa and Indonesia. Ripe red pods are taken from cacao trees.Then pods are harvested to obtain white cacao beans from it. Furthermore, beans are dry up in sun rays. However after drying the beans, beans are packed into large sacks. The large sacks are putted into train or lorry to transport it to the production mill.
In addition to this, the large bags have been taken to the factory and brand are roasted at a temperature of 350•. After roasting, beans are crushed by a machine and outer layer of beans have been removed from it. Interestingly , remaining part of beans have been pressed and liquid chocolate have been produced from that. Production process of chocolate ends here.s
It can be inferre dim the process that chocolate is obain by passing ten mandatory steps.
Then pods are harvested to obtain white cacao beans from it
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beans are dry up
beans are dried up
are putted into train
are put into train
It can be inferre dim the process that chocolate is obain by passing ten mandatory steps.
It can be inferred im the process that chocolate is obtained by passing ten mandatory steps.
Sentence: It can be inferre dim the process that chocolate is obain by passing ten mandatory steps.
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Error: inferre Suggestion: inferred
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