Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There are many species of wild animals on the earth, and many are considered to be rare. Mostly all animals live in the jungle, but humans have created zoos and caged them snatching away their freedom. Many people are against keeping wild animals in zoos while other sets of people feel that the zoos should be encouraged. In my opinion, both the statements carry their own advantages that we will discuss further but my inclination is against the concept of zoos.
We cannot deny that Freedom is everyone’s right including animals. Chaining them and caging them in a zoo is against the ethics. T...
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though zoos have many advantages for both humans and animals, but still I personally
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