Do you agree or disagree that legends are born or become a legend by hardworking ?
Everybody in life wants to become a person with different personality , one who is known for his special quality , that's called a legend. The quality of being a legend is sometimes innate but mostly it can be grown by hard work. Personalities like Amitabh Bachhan , Shaheed Bhagat singh and many more are the perfect examples of legends, but they become a celebrity by working very hard in life , they have gone through the tough situations of life to achieve a name of a legend. According to my point of view I think that hard work is the first step to become a famous person , without this nothing is possible. The reasons for my standpoint are explored below.
Actually a legend is a very big name given to a person, It may be true that the qualities of a star or a famous personality be sometimes innate, if the respective person is directed towards the particular goal and works to build his innate quality then that person can reach to the desired goal , all is dependent on the amount of hard work done. There are many examples that shows name and fame cannot be achieved unless doing something different in life.
In addition a person has to face the toughest situations in life to reach to the pinnacle, for example Shaheed Bhagat Singh the living legend of India was hanged in a very short age by the British officers when India was under their control, he was just 23 years old when he was hanged, At the age of 10 he used to participate in the rellies against Britishers , the alacrity to get India free from those rulers grow inside him , as he grew old he along with his friends get involved in attacks against the foreign rulers , several times he was put to jail regarding these issues , he saw a very tough times in his life , At last the made India free from the british rulers and is known as a living legend of India , this is how a person had face the rough situations to become a famous personality. Similarly one more celebrity of Indian cinemas is Amitabh Bachhan , which was a superstar at one time, was born in a poor hindu family ,his family was not able to afford his studies so he worked hard by polishing shoes of the people outside the religious places , as he grew he joined Indian cinema with an advertisement of some household product, again he worked very hard there and with the passage of time he entered in movies and brought wonders to Indian cinema, all of his movies were superhit, then he became the superstar of Indian Cinemas.
In the nutshell, the person has to work hard , has to see tough times to achieve something big in life, So in this way I have proved myself that legends are not born instead they become by facing hard times and working very hard to achieve their goal.
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