It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business, rather than work for a employer.
Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?
In recent times, numerous ambitious young adults aim to start up their own business instead of working under an employer. It is undeniable that setting up your own business is certainly attractive and challenging idea. However, I personally believe that opening their own business in early age takes significant risks such as deficit of management experience or financial issues. In this essay, I will address my opinion of why I suggest to start a business in later age.
On the one hand, setting up your own business provides you a freedom to make your own decision and it can be an absolute ch...
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is certainly attractive and challenging idea
is certainly an attractive and challenging idea
working for yourself is interesting and attractive aspiration.
working for yourself is interesting and attractive.
working for yourself is an interesting and attractive aspiration.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 415 350
No. of Characters: 1967 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.513 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.74 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.737 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.056 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.913 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5