These days, more and more people are going to other countries. for significant periods of time, either to find job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who lived abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in foreign country.
Nowadays, taking a year out to live or study abroad is becoming increasingly popular for many people, especially young adults, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In my essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why moving abroad is popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let’s begin by looking at the positive side about moving away, one of the main advantages of healing overseas is that it broadens your horizons, also you have a chance to meet people from different cultural backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. For instance, Japanese people travel every year to western countries amusing the warm weather, also delicious foods and amazing natural sights. so, one of the consequences of traveling or studying abroad is that you will accept qualifications and languages skills which help you to deal with a new society.
Turning to the other side of the arguments, culture shock is a major problem. many people who take a year out find it hard to acclimatize with a new horizon also with different cultures according to the language barrier. this often led to homesickness and in some cases sense of isolation.
in other words, when you move abroad, you have to make a new friend and find your place in the community. this process takes time and can be especially changing if there is also a language barrier to deal with.
to sum up, although starting life in a new country is never easy , people can deal with the new begging measuring the positive of a better lifestyle also the negative of culture shock and language barrier personally, I believe that the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for instance, in other words, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82474226804 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62305517765 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.988750269 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225991980734 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835984427512 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334100914981 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124092395685 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258638424012 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.