Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The course of development of human civillisation has been defined and repeatedly altered by the individuals who are considered greats in their own fields. Various political and economic decisions made by great visionary leaders and various discoveries made by great scientists are some examples of the greats shaping the world through their efforts. An old saying states-"Some are born great,some achieve greatness and some have greatness thrust upon them". The prodigal children who have a god gifted talent in a given field fall in the born great category. Thus, if groomed properly, such children ...
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Sentence: The course of development of human civillisation has been defined and repeatedly altered by the individuals who are considered greats in their own fields.
Error: civillisation Suggestion: civilization
Sentence: Thus, if groomed properly, such children can shape the future of the world towards etterment.
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Sentence: Had Einstein's talent been recognised at an early age, he might have taken quantum physics and relativity to new heights altogether.
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Sentence: If the specially talented children are recognised at an early age, they can be given suitable conditions where they can develop their special talents.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized
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