Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are the rules which any civil society makes inorder to guard against the violation of the civil norms by some of the members of the society. The laws are essential to the running of any civil society as the interpretation of these laws determines the code of conduct of living in that society. Laws are the means which keep any society on its tracks preventing the wrongdoings among its members, thereby protecting the society from slipping into anarchy and barbaranism. However, the day to dye human life, due to its intinsic dynamic nature keeps throwing up situations which have not been prov...
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Sentence: A murder committed by an adult willfully, under no other person's influence,for or without material gain,not under any kind of provocation and in mentally sound condition amounts to a first degree murder.
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Sentence: Laws are the rules which any civil society makes inorder to guard against the violation of the civil norms by some of the members of the society.
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Sentence: Laws are the means which keep any society on its tracks preventing the wrongdoings among its members, thereby protecting the society from slipping into anarchy and barbaranism.
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Sentence: However, the day to dyt human life,due to its intinsic dynamic nature keeps throwing up situations which have not been provided for previously,in the current code of law.
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Sentence: In order to deal with such exceptional circumastances and provide true justice,laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
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Sentence: There are various examples of exceptional circumstances where laws can be broken.Death penalty is a common penalty for murder in many nations.However in most of these nations the law has been made flexible over its practice to accomodate for unusual circumstances.
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Sentence: However the law has been made flexible enough in many nations to accomodate exceptional circumstances for murder.
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Sentence: However,as time will pass amendments will be needed in such laws if the lower classes start misusing such laws to dominate the stronger classes to gain advantage.Even today,at times the people of weaker classes are let off with small punishments or only with warnings on crimes where a member of previlaged class will face harsher terms.
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