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The diagram we are given illustrates how plastics are produced by processing the raw materials.
First of all,we can see that the equipments are conveyed from an oil refinery to a factory by a lorry and they are unloaded into the first container. At the next stage of the process, the substances are transferred to the oven where all of them are pressed high in order to being crumpled up into long molecules. Afterwards, all molecules are entered into another container in order to form synthetic granuals. Subsequently, all pieces are sent to injection moulder for melting. And finally, the machine releases the product.
Before packing and storaging, ready items are checked for their quality by controllers of the enterprise. If unuseful products are found out they are thrown into the dustbins. All remained healthy plastics are transported to the warehouses in order to being presented to manufacturers for using for economical purposes.
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Sentence: Before packing and storaging, ready items are checked for their quality by controllers of the enterprise.
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