TPO 22 – Integrated
Both the lecture and reading discuss about whether the Ethanol fuel is a good alternative to gasoline or not. The reading claims that Ethanol does not have practical conditions in order to use as a kind of fuel instead of gasoline. However, the lecture casts a shadow of doubt on what the author mentions and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, it was proved that, on the contrary of the reading passage, Ethanol does not add any carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Plants absorb carbon dioxide as their nutrition and remove it from atmosphere. In addition, Ethanol is made from corn, so more plants must be cultivated that prevent to release more carbon dioxide into atmosphere. Hence, the global warming would be reduced by using Ethanol.
Secondly, the lecture argues that for creating Ethanol, farmer use cellulous products that are not eaten by animals. Therefore, how the number of plants accessible which is source of food for animal can reduce. This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates.
Finally, the speaker brings up the idea that the price of Ethanol and gasoline is the same. In addition, the government support is always essential for producers. By government support the amount of productions increase, so it causes to diminish the price of Ethanol. In the future by this support and approach, the price of Ethanol will be decrease by forty percent. This completely refutes what is stated the reading passage which Ethanol would be an expensive fuel.
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Ethanol does not have practical conditions in order to use as a kind of fuel
Ethanol does not have practical conditions in order to be used as a kind of fuel
which is source of food for animal
which is the source of food for animals
the price of Ethanol will be decrease by forty percent.
the price of Ethanol will be decreased by forty percent.
Sentence: Secondly, the lecture argues that for creating Ethanol, farmer use cellulous products that are not eaten by animals.
Error: cellulous Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Sentence Length SD: 4.657 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 250 250
No. of Characters: 1225 1200
No. of Different Words: 137 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.9 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.434 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.657 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4