The benefits of physical exercises
Nowadays, people tend to run after fame and success and forget about the most important and essential thing is health. If you have good health, you can have everything. Therefore, physical exercise is indispensable to have good health. So why we need to do physical exercise? First of all, it helps us have more energy to do everything. Secondly, physical exercise assists us keep fir and have a nice body. Many people put off weight successfully or became taller by doing exercises. Moreover. physical exercises aids us in lengthening our longevity. Many researches showed that people who usually do exercises have longer lifespan than people who don't. Last but not least, physical exercise makes us feel comfortable and relaxing. After a hard-working day, you can do some exercises by playing sports such as football, basketball, tennis or badminton. It brings not only good health but also relaxation and fun. In conclusion, health is the most valuable thing everybody has. Therefore, we need to do physical exercise every day to have good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11046511628 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81079849078 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3014845809 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7857142857 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269905735627 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124584403895 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125343787707 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269905735627 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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