Describe your principal skills and your character opportunity areas. Brieftly write down the more impact experiences in your life.
I’m proud of the fact that I maintain my undergraduate studying with a solid GPA while I’m engaging in quite a lot of extracurricular activities. Many of my colleagues of my team either take a reduced course load or let their grade suffer. I believe the reason I got through it all was sheer determination; I never even let myself visualize anything but finishing on time and with good grades. Morever, I’m rather good at time and task management which enables me to fulfill all my task within the deadline and successful.
Thanks to my creativity, I together with my team have won the second prize for “Challenge your mind” contest, a contest that test about critical thinking, problem-solving, eloquence as well as presentation skills. I also got to the final in MC contest held by Admin club. It’s the moment that I learn about not only fast-thinking but also about dloquence skill, confidence, experience, ability to improvise, team work skill.
Further and more importantly, though leadership is one of my pivotal advantage. I believe (and many people said) that I have a good aptitude for leadership. Not only can I have a positive influence on others, but I am also able to have a good vision and subtle plans that’re extremly useful in hard situation. The very first time I tried real leader position, I easily got things running organizedly and smoothly with good result.
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Sentence: The world needs innovation and iniatiatives to exist, and so are people.
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Sentence: It's the moment that I learn about not only fast-thinking but also about dloquence skill, confidence, experience, ability to improvise, team work skill.
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Sentence: Not only can I have a positive influence on others, but I am also able to have a good vision and subtle plans that're extremly useful in hard situation.
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Sentence: The very first time I tried real leader position, I easily got things running organizedly and smoothly with good result.
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Sentence: I consider myself to fulfill my assignments well, especially in allocating duties and encouring others to do well.
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Sentence: On top of that, I have managed to overcome difficulties in the field that I am not goot at.
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Sentence: All in all, I consider myself to be an extremly energetic and creative person.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 44 15
No. of Words: 959 350
No. of Characters: 4418 1500
No. of Different Words: 403 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.565 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.607 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.8 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 302 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 197 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 157 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 108 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.795 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.793 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5