Direction: use the following words; render, imminent, scrumptious, mar, avarice, reticent, ludicrous, acquaintance, analyze, convoluted, auspicious, vivacious, adversary, cogent, and demise to write about how your day went yesterday. Minimum 300 words.
I woke up sound and healthy, the day was very auspicious and my surroundings were also vivacious. I prayed to God as usual and get up from my bed. My lesson is important as always, and that must be attended to. Therefore, my day has to be planned and guided, I did that swiftly, and brush my mouth, and straight to my reading table.
I started as planned, analyzing one convoluted topic on algebra, which I have been working on for some days, and as that was going on, my neighbor knocked on my door with this scrumptious appetizing breakfast, I didn’t hesitate to receive it from her, for I was wondering about my breakfast, since we’re asked to remain indoors. Thank you darling I said, and I shut the door and resumed my study.
While my study was still going, there was a noise downstairs, when I peeped through my window, the atmosphere seems dire, I tried to listen from the window, but was missing the information. In less than 5 minutes my neighbor showed up on my door with this sad news about the demise of an acquaintance, the tidings were unbearable for her, she couldn’t hold it, therefore she went downstairs to hear more about the decease, and the cause of his death. The information was that the guy was among those shot by soldiers last Saturday. I felt so pitiful, for I knew this guy.
I went back to my room and decided to take a nap for a while because the tidings have marred my lessons and couldn’t resume again. When I waked up, it’s already past five, I decided to take my bath and go look for dinner for the evening is imminent, there is also a curfew and it’s not a ludicrous matter with the law enforcement. Therefore, I did that fleetly and went down the street looking for what to eat, fortuitously for me I saw one vendor roasting corn, she looks pretty smart, and when I approached her, I asked how much are those? She said; 200. What! I replied, and she was reticent, in my mind I concluded not to pay the money because it was pricey and the young lady seems avaricious to me. So, I left and continue my wandering till I got to a place where I can have my dinner, though the environment wasn’t good enough, my paunch was dry and the sign it was giving is so cogently, which I couldn’t resist. No other alternatives, I managed everything and went back home.
Finally, my day circuitously interested and on the other hand irksome. Circuitously because of the breakfast and irksome because of the sad news, but in things to God be the glory, the day has come and gone, tomorrow will be more beneficial than today. I ended my day with prayer and thankfulness to God for how my day and everything went, rendering to God all adorations and praises for he is a wonderful God and has indeed shamed my adversary. For two hours or so, I was awake and later went to bed.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement A teacher s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught 70
- Direction use the following words render imminent scrumptious mar avarice reticent ludicrous acquaintance analyze convoluted auspicious vivacious adversary cogent and demise to write about how your day went yesterday Minimum 300 words 11
- Direction use the following words brusque clandestine suffice apprise aversion innate dovetail errant victual expound aphorism uncanny quintessential bevy and caliber to form a sentence about how your last weekend went Minimum 120 words 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 986, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... managed everything and went back home. Finally, my day circuitously interested ...
^^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so, I was awake and later went to bed.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 10.4138276553 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 24.0651302605 349% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 520.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41346153846 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59592235435 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 5.43587174349 460% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3063796802 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7619047619 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.065234600755 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223491389204 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232352127142 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441611014414 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155602461644 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.