Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern world smartphones have become an indispensable part of almost every person's life. However like every coin that has two sides; smartphones have affected the society in a both positive and negative manner. However I do not agree with the fact that the cons of the smartphones outweigh their benefits. This is due to the tremendous benefits they have in our personal, social and professional lives.
Smartphones have indeed brought the world closer. People who are thousands of miles away from each other are not only able to talk to one another but also see each other via video calls all due to smartphones. For example an old person whose children and grandchildren live in a different country is able to see them and converse with them everyday only with the help of a smart phone in absence of these smartphones, it would have been very hard for him to write letters to them and then wait for days until they reach the other nation. Thus smartphones have definitely proven to be boon and reduced the communication gap.
Smartphones have been of much help to people at individual level as well. For instance, a youngster who has started living alone and does not know how to cook can easily surf online for various recipes. He could also call or text his family and friends asking for their help. Smartphones can also be of assistance to him in other routine activities like fixing electric appliances, ordering for various commodities online and so on. Thus smartphones have without a doubt been of help to individuals to get through their day to day activities.
In one's professional life as well smartphones have used their magic and made it easier. For example various money transactions, business deals, international meetings can be done with their help. If a person is sick and is unable to physically report to work, he can do all his job over his phone staying at home. Thus work life has been positively impacted due to smartphones.
Thus, due to various benefits that smart phones have in all walks of life, I am of the strong opinion that smartphones have in no way caused greater harm than good to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...in a both positive and negative manner. However I do not agree with the fact that the c...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[2]
Message: Consider using 'do disagree that' or 'do agree that'.
Suggestion: do disagree that; do agree that
...positive and negative manner. However I do not agree with the fact that the cons of the smartphones outweigh th...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...indeed brought the world closer. People who are thousands of miles away from each other...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...days until they reach the other nation. Thus smartphones have definitely proven to b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...r various commodities online and so on. Thus smartphones have without a doubt been o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...his job over his phone staying at home. Thus work life has been positively impacted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7688172043 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66914232118 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561827956989 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6790789093 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179314217419 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622086799773 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494990367408 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114223563748 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504894412778 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.